My Narrative Writing Promt

Kia ora my awesome,

This week me and my class have been working on putting language features into narratives.

I have made a narrative with language features in them.

here is my narrative

1. Onomatopoeia  - ‘Bang’

2. Metaphor - “You are the sun!’

3. Personification “The clouds danced across the sky.”

4. Hyperboles - “I was so embarrassed I would have stuck my head in the toilet to hide.”

5. Alliteration - “It was time for super Sunday sports.”

6. Dialogue - “Don’t move,” Ellenessa whispered.

BANG! She tries to bowl him, the enemy doesn't budge. The john is as heavy as a cow and as the bull jewellery.I couldn't bowl him over. I tried to use my magical power but it didn't work.I go get another magic jewellery and find my cousin, my jewellery has one minute left until i turn back into myself.

7 hours before I had never thought this would happen.

VROOM! Robot aliens mind control the strongest person in the world I go Hide somewhere where no one can see me I say the magic words that makes my ring power up “Selena Scales slither” and I go up and fight the bad guy, but he was too strong and I tried to find the Guardian of the magic jewellery. he said “find a companion to work beside you on your adventure to defeat those aliens” I get the bull hair brush and I find my cousin and give her the bull hair brush she says “jazz horns charge.

We chase the bad guy around and Riley chases him until he runs out of energy, I run up to the bad guy and use my special Powers I say “ Venom bite”  I run up to him with my special weapon that powers up when I say  venom bite, I run up to him and the fangs on my weapon bite him and paralyses him so he stays in one place then 

We grab the alien ship it is tiny so I knew the aliens must be tiny I take their gun and brake the line of mind control  we save the day after all and we throw the aliens back into space where they came from and we save Christchurch for one more day. But it snot all over yet we need a space koami so we can go into space to defeat all of the aliens that are trying to mind control our civilization. 

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