My narrative writing

Welcome, Talofa,

Today I have a very good story to show you, 

I have been working on this narrative for 3 or 4 days I hope you like it we have been learning to make a strong narrative wecan describe the setting it has to be descriptive, believable and consistent we turned boring sentences into descriptive sentenses, and I posted this on Thursday June 4

We have also been writing about a girl called Anna

The Mirror in the Attic

She had found it lying alone, deserted, abandoned in the attic. After making the discovery, Anna had gazed and marvelled at it for some time. Where had it come from? Why had no dust settled upon it, as it had done over everything else that resided in her attic? A layer of the thick dust blanketed the attic floor, and as the sunlight shone through the attic windows, the dust particles yet to settle were illuminated as they hovered in the stuffy air. Yet, the mirror looked flawless, untouched by age, not a finger print in sight.

Anna propped the mirror up against one of the thick, timber beams that jutted from the attic floor. Settling down into a comfortable position, she tentatively placed a finger against the glass and her hand went right through. When she got to the other side she was made of blocks. Then she realised she was in the game she always played blockstarplanet. She made a world made of mansions. and another two girls appeared in the mansion. one was called Riley and one was called Anna She explored the mansions and found a remote and a TV.   

THE END!

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my narrative writing

Hello ladies and gentlemen boys and girls,

Today I am going to tell you about  my narrative writing,

This is my writing.

The USS Enterprise of earth zooms at warp 8 Into the galaxy of Umato.
Captain Picard is sitting alone at a table in the deserted cafeteria.
It's  Lunch time and he's sitting and thinking what will happen next.
Captain Picard stands up and leaves the cafeteria for his quarters.


Suddenly Worf calls Commander Riker and Captain Picard over their
intercoms from the bridge. Worf taps his intercom
“Commander Riker and Captain Picard you are needed on the bridge”.
Captain Picard and Commander Riker walk to the bridge  “Sir the romulans are
attacking,”Worf said in a very deep voice. “Sir their hailing us”. “on screen”
he says. but then the Romulans ship starts shaking and loses control, The
enterprise lets lose their tractorbeam and beames the captain of the Romulans
aboard.