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Friday 1 May 2020

I'm a poet and i didn't know it

Kia ora ladies and gentlemen boys and girls,


Today I am going to tell you about my poetry,


I have to choose a season for poetry writing,
this is what it looks like.



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4 comments:

  1. Diane1 May 2020 at 13:34

    Kia ora Sean. I can feel the winter coming in your poem...brrr! I like that you have 2 longer parts and a shorter one in the middle. It keeps it interesting. Is it your favourite season? I prefer spring or autumn. Keep up the good work. :)

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  2. Miss D1 May 2020 at 16:58

    Ahhh... so descriptive! What an excellent poem Sean. You have really manipulate your reader's feelings by using descriptive adjectives and like Diane I felt a bit chilly after reading it. Glad you're a poet... and now I know it ....

    Awesome blog,
    Miss D

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  3. Mrs Cassidy3 May 2020 at 16:27

    Good afternoon Sean.Thanks for sharing your poem.I'm just thinking,it won't be much longer before winter is here.Hopefully we get a good dumping of snow.Have a great week.

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  4. Mrs Day7 May 2020 at 17:17

    Wow Sean
    The first 3-4 words in you opening sentence really set the atmosphere of the poem Awesome chose of words!!
    I also really like "last leaves fall", makes me feel despondent and really describes the bleakness of the winter to come. You have been able to describe what I can see and also how I should feel.
    Thanks for sharing this with us.

    ps......I noticed all the capital letters and full-stops too

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