Describe Writing

For writing we are working on describing pictures.  We need to use lots of adjective and similes.  I really like my piece of writing about a creepy house.  I hope you enjoy it. (Miss Scott helped me a little bit with this.)

Dark night surrounded the lonely house.  It’s broken boards hung down and the weak moonlight shone
off the shattered glass that littered the ground.  An eerie red glow shone out.

The white fog filled the air.  It reached up towards the house.  Who knows what terrors were hidden
beneath it.  The fog touched my skin and goosebumps erupted all over me.

Vampire bats surrounded the house like vultures surrounding dead animals. And trees towering like
monsters near the house.  The bear branches looking like skeleton fingers.