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Friday 14 June 2019

I'm spying on you


One day there was something really exciting called spies.spy 101 was the name of a spy team. "hi my code name is
Black Whack i’m all in blue remember that now. I know it looks black but i’m in the dark so it looks black I beat up all
of the bad guy’s myself my moves that i do is power moves. I know you probably haven't heard of one okay I will tell
you what it is. A power move is two moves joined together like frees breath and batarang to make a force of evil I but
can stop that happening so count on me like 1 2 3 I will be there. Hay that’s what cow's eat. that’s a part of a song.
That count on me like 123 I will be there part. I hope you have a good day. ow bees fleas i have to kill a bad guy
i’m sure it will take a second by for now”. AAA “ i’m back how did the wait go boring/good ”.

4 comments:

  1. Hello Sean.
    I enjoyed reading your unusual story. I am glad you explained that he was wearing blue because even I thought it was black. I even said to myself as I was reading your story 'it's black'.
    I did find it a little hard to understand your story as it seems a bit mixed up with the words and just remember that 'i' needs to be a capital 'I'.

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    1. Hi Mrs Cassidy love the feedback i just realised that thank you maybe i will fix it but until i do might want to wate by.

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  2. Hello Sean.
    This is just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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  3. Hi Sean It is me Shjon I really enjoyed your story It was amazing!!
    I really enjoyed the batarang and the freeze breath

    Shjon
    P.S click on my name to go to my blog!

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