Test Finishing Score

Hello readers,

This blog post is about my writing work-ons. In term four I scored really high. These are all my next steps: 

Paragraph

Use commas to show clauses (different parts of a sentence).

Add punctuation to create mood and show greater detail to hook my readers in.

Vocab

Use words and phrases that grab the reader’s attention and interest.

Organization

Link together sentences that match what is happening in my writing.

Make headings vivid and noticeable for the reader.

Sentance

Make sure I choose the right sentence to show the reader what I want them to know or how I want them to feel.

Structure

Try to match all parts of of my writing to the text type.

Ideas

Add a lot of information to help the reader understand my ideas.

Make sure my ideas show complexity (have extra information, detail or facts that explain my thinking).

I can write more than 3 Ideas in 1 paragraph

Thank you for reading.

healthy eating

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this blog is about eating healthy.

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who, what, when, where, why, how

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This blog post is about B+E (Business and Enterprise). Every year at high school there is a market day I am going to be doing some questions on this post.

Who is in my group/business adviser: Harmony Hamish Blake Me / Mr Collins.

What is our product: We are making scrunchies as our product.

When is market day: December the first.

Where will we sell our product: On school grounds.

Why are we having market day: to experience All the hard work that business men have to go though.

How am I enjoying the experience: I am enjoying the experience really well.

Thank you for your time and please comment.

writing

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This blog is about writing the writing I have done.

One dark day at school  a diff apocalypse heaps of  the population dies so the world Doesn't end. I didn't die. My friends did. I was lonely. I went to the old school area all I heard was windy bushes and undead talking “ Brains” I got spooked and ran to Carmen Road and all I saw was dead grass and broken down cars and crashes. It was a bit carnage for me so I walked over to the netball court and smelled something “ sea water I looked” over the fence and saw a tsunami, so I ran as fast as my feet could carry me. to what looked like the learning Commons. All I felt was my favourite book and pencil. end of life file

 Ms Bancroft comes back alive 

Sean

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Day With Ace Ventura

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This blog post is about my 100 word count. This is fictional not real,

Day with Ace Ventura

Atleast a week ago I went to the pools in Africa since it was so hot out. I saw Ace Ventura being himself. He was as funny as ever, we played water volleyball and he ate ice cream. We were all so happy. After an hour passed he had to go home. I had such a fun time when my family and I left. We went home and had lunch at a cafe that Ace Ventura led us to. It was so nice. He let me have a big mac and heaps of Minnie hot dogs after all of that we headed home. The day after that we went on a plane he baute us first class and got nice accommodations we went back to New Zealand and before we took off he gave us heaps of money mum gave us 180 dollars each and i got a R,C Shark he originally gave us 2000 dollars and mum got a new house. She got a shampain glass and a 24 pack of Jacobs creek wine she gave me some shh don't tell dad.

Thank you for reading please leave a comment I'm lonely

Financial Literacy

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This blog is about the animal that my friends chose, this is the stuff and the fish that we came up with.

If you liked the fish please comment.

Thanks for reading. Bye.

hokey pokey making

 Hello readers,

This blog post is about making hokey pokey, We got the final result for it and it tasted great and looked good.

Here are the pictures

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refletion time

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This blog is about reflection time, Reflection time includes our c.a.r.r values commitment achievement resilience and respect. 

Commitment: What I did for this was leaned more into drama and maths.

Achievement: This was the hardest one to think about this year I finished most of my work and I feel that is a pretty good achievement.

Resilience: When I was doing my work it was hard to do and or understand but I kept going.

Respect: When I was doing my work I didn't argue or through things around

my goal for next week is finishing all the days work in that day

Thank you for reading this long as blog post.

art stuff

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This blog post is about art the art that i am doing now is drawing and copying and coloring and copying and doing it again 

This is my art work

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Tongan work

Greetings,

This blog is about my word search.

Here is my word search.

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litmus paper

 Hello readers,

This blog is about litmus and ph levels

Litmus is a tree fungi and is made into small paper strips or a liquid for testing acids or alkalines.

1. Blue Litmus paper determines if something is acidic.

2. It turns red in solutions with a pH less than 7.

3. Red Litmus paper determines if something is alkaline.

4. It turns blue in solutions with a pH greater than 7.

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